Check out my rap bellow (pretty shit i know)

I`m gonna eat you starting from your elbow, yeah, i`m a cannibal, just like Hannibal, waiting for you in a corner since 1 week ago, you`ll never know where i am, i`m unpredictable, waiting for you behind a bush just like an animal, my claws are ready, yeah, they r ready to slit your throat. u try to breath but u`re incapable... Wait for me in your funeral, with a camouflage suit suited on, stole it from a general that i killed with several stabs in his eyeballs, now i can say im undetectable,now im like a sad clown, my tears are fake but my interior smile is not, this story goes on, triple dot